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With all the details involved in developing a Web site, entrepreneurs sometimes mistakenly overlook the importance of their site's written content. Often, design and programming take precedence over the crafting of each sentence.
It's through your site's words that you communicate with customers and prospects. Words set the tone for your company. They make it appear approachable or stodgy. They build trust in your product or destroy your credibility. Correctly assembled, they have an impact on your search-engine rankings.
"If the content on your site isn't compelling, it doesn't matter how nifty your product or service is. A visitor may not stick around to read about what you offer," says Debbie Weil, publisher of Word Biz Report, a Washington, D.C.-based publication helping businesses create effective content for their Web sites.
Ms. Weil, a former journalist, doesn't discount the importance of good design. "Appealing, effective design is important, but the design should make visitors read the page, and guide them to the major parts of the page," she says. In fact, Ms. Weil believes a site's words are as important as the graphics, navigation and back-end technology.
Entrepreneurs have "a huge job of selling," says Ms. Weil, and at each step of the sales process they need to provide clear answers to the user. The right words, she points out, can drive revenue to your business.
"Writing is both an art and a science. The science is the facts, figures and benefits to the customer; the art is putting that together to make copy that flows naturally," she says.
Besides presenting sales information, your site can raise your profile -- and credibility -- if it includes articles about your industry or perhaps a news section with summaries and links to expanded resources. For example, "A marketing consultant might post the '10 reasons why you should hire a marketing consultant,' " says Ms. Weil, but she cautions: "Don't write about yourself. That's too sales-oriented."
While pertinent industry analysis or helpful tips may bolster your online presence, typos and grammar mistakes hurt your credibility. If writing isn't your strongest skill, consider hiring a free-lance writer or editor to assist you. Also, enlist the aid of friends or family for proofreading.
Selecting a Free-lance Writer
So you're not Hemingway. How do you hire someone to produce the pithy prose you desire? Ms. Weil believes the most important factor is finding a writer whose approach matches your own.
Ask how he or she works with clients via fax, phone or e-mail. For many entrepreneurs, whether the writer will put in the extra effort to finalize their site within deadlines is critical.
Further, look for experience. "Get clips; ask to see an example of a Web site or an online newsletter he or she has written," says Ms. Weil. "If you have a limited budget, you don't have the resources to experiment while someone learns online copywriting skills. Be upfront about what you're looking for. Be specific."
Letting Your Personality Shine
While much of today's online content originated as printed material, copywriting experts advise against simply posting existing copy to your Web site. Web users tend to like informal copy, and brochures usually are written more formally, from the perspective of "the corporation."
"You can't just take text you use in print and use it online," says Montreal-based consultant and author Nick Usborne, who helps large and small businesses analyze what messages users get from Web sites, newsletters and "anything in the online space."
For example, a brochure is written for a reader to leisurely explore a product's features. Web users, however, have different goals when they visit a site. "The Web audience has a task-oriented mind set. They want to get to information quickly and easily," Mr. Usborne says. While brochures or direct-mail pieces can have long sentences and paragraphs, Web sites shouldn't, he says. Such copy is "difficult to read," he explains. "You want to inform, yet the audience has limited time."
Mr. Usborne emphasizes that writers need to be deeply connected to the audience's needs. For example, he cites the American Cancer Society Web site, which is most often used by friends or relatives of cancer patients. The site has a simple sentence -- "No matter who you are, we can help." This shows how much the organization has thought about its visitors.
One small-business man who has been successful writing his own online copy is Eric Lupton of Life Saver Systems, a Delray Beach, Fla., manufacturer of swimming-pool fencing. In writing for Poolfence.com, Mr. Lupton provides parents with the information they need, even while he empathizes with their problems.
"When you understand your audience, you speak in a way they understand. You don't use industry jargon or technical terms," says Mr. Lupton, who's been writing and managing the site for five years. His e-mail tag line is concise and cute: "Keeping little feet on the ground for over a decade." He explains, "It appeals to people, especially young mothers."
Mr. Lupton has gone so far as to write standard messages for his distributors to use when e-mailing customers about his products. "The message that gets to the audience is very important," he says. "The distributors may not be the best writers, or typists, or have the time. This way, the clients are getting professionally written responses."
Writing for Spiders
Finally, words perform a strategic function on your Web site: They influence the search engine "spiders" -- or software robots -- that comb through online text and use it to categorize pages. Milwaukee florist Greg Johnson, who has been writing for his Greenfield Flower Shop Web site since 1997, focuses on creating text that will help his site get picked up by search engines.
"You want your site to be found," he says. Plus, Mr. Johnson says, once a user lands on his site he wants them to stay.
The site features a personal and friendly style that alleviates customers' concerns by speaking to them directly and warmly. "We understand that purchasing flowers can often be an intimidating experience," the site says.
On occasion, Mr. Johnson has hired outside writers to produce content. "The people who've done the best job are genuinely excited about receiving flowers themselves," he says. That enthusiasm comes through in their writing.
Capturing that enthusiasm in your online copy just may translate to customers who feel good about your product or service.
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-- Ms. Miller is editor of Small Business Web Update, a publication of Tramp Steamer Media, a publishing company based in Trenton, N.J.
Email your comments to sjeditor@dowjones.com.
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